Since I've seen your new pictures, I wanted to say "great", but I also wanted to say that there is some little problem,
but to me you did such a nice job with the mouth, that I didn't wanted to disturb you with my tune!
So first, the eyes must be on the same line because it's a predator (Like human, even if we have nothing else from predator "J'vou slaisse réfléchir là-dessus!)", you did bird's eyes.
And second, the back of his head must be very longer. But the problem his that you will have a bigger head, and it won't size to his body,
because the mouth is not at the same scale than the body.... and the feeling of threnght that we can all recognize on the initial draw of Amaterasu
came also from the size of the head, that is realy realy small. To give strenght impression on characters it works better with small head, or big body
(yes because small head could say, small brain, but we don't want this at all!
)
So that's why when we are making a figure, I always prefer to make the head first, and then the body,
even if when we are begening a new project, it's most of the time because we want to make the body first!
So with a head like that he looks just younger, is that what you wanted to get? And now what will you do? And then what will we saw? What's on your mind? why do I always have to suffocate the Unkit's rare members with my comments? Will the New World Order impose to everyone a 25 hours day to get more monay?
Anyway, I just wanted to say first that you are very tallented, and I'm sure aaht with a little more technics you could became very easaly a real good sculptor,
because it's not difficult when you have the skills like you do!
Imagination, patience et exigence! That's the secret!